23.10.2019 22:48
Heute war ich in Leeds zu einem Poetry Workshop, um mir Tips zu holen, wie ich besserdurch den Schaffungsprozess komme. Ich streiche zu viel durch, sollte in Drafts eher Sachen einkreisen oder einklammern, da das später noch nutzbar sein könnte.
Das habe ich in einer Ubungsrunde versucht und ein Draft kam heraus:
- Walking on eggshells -
They said you don't fit in
The clothes you chose to wear,
Don't fit with the people around you, with them.
It was Them. And You. They said.
When their expectations formed a cast 'round you so well,
You didn't know that the mould was only a shell
Made from societal limitations, unsuitable for variations.
So when this cast around you cracked,
They didn't know what to expect
Until you hatched.
Das habe ich in einer Ubungsrunde versucht und ein Draft kam heraus:
- Walking on eggshells -
They said you don't fit in
The clothes you chose to wear,
Don't fit with the people around you, with them.
It was Them. And You. They said.
When their expectations formed a cast 'round you so well,
You didn't know that the mould was only a shell
Made from societal limitations, unsuitable for variations.
So when this cast around you cracked,
They didn't know what to expect
Until you hatched.